February 13, 2010
Here is the rough cut of my TV Drama Opening:
The critique I had received for this was that the pre-opening sequence didn't have any continuity meaning that none of the events flowed. Therefore, I have planned to include extra shots that would help the continuity of the piece. For the beginning, instead of going straight into the ritual, I have chosen to zoom into a house and then initiate the ritual. Subsequently, the phone call will be preceded by a stalker in order to give it some sense whilst keep the narrative distorted. Then before the city shots I will have an eye in order to reinforce the fact that the main character sees the future. Finally, the Chimera Corp. clip will have jump cuts of the Greek letters Lambda, Chi and Nu, whilst having a part where a character is writing down the symbols and the possible connotations of them. This I believe should bring the pre- title sequence to a definitive close and establish an understandable yet distorted narrative.
The critique I had received for this was that the pre-opening sequence didn't have any continuity meaning that none of the events flowed. Therefore, I have planned to include extra shots that would help the continuity of the piece. For the beginning, instead of going straight into the ritual, I have chosen to zoom into a house and then initiate the ritual. Subsequently, the phone call will be preceded by a stalker in order to give it some sense whilst keep the narrative distorted. Then before the city shots I will have an eye in order to reinforce the fact that the main character sees the future. Finally, the Chimera Corp. clip will have jump cuts of the Greek letters Lambda, Chi and Nu, whilst having a part where a character is writing down the symbols and the possible connotations of them. This I believe should bring the pre- title sequence to a definitive close and establish an understandable yet distorted narrative.
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